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FIC: Pinny, Slaying, Part 1 [G]
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Eric Jablow
2007-03-06 04:45:29 UTC
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Pinny, Slaying
by Eric Jablow
Part One

Synopsis: Willow's spell called all the slayers in
every dimension, even when one of the dimensions is
missing.

Rating: G. Some comic-panel type violence.

Note: I am using British spellings here to keep with
the flavour of the original source. The source is in
the public domain; try guessing what it is, and where
the slang comes from.

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"Why are you undulating so much? One might think you
were talking to a boy you wanted to attract, instead of
your father." Pin's father Octavian was a humourless
bureaucrat in the Bureau of Weights and Measures; he
expected nothing from his daughter but obedience.

"I am sorry, Father. I don't know what got into me,"
said Pin.

"Nothing can get into you, daughter. You're not built
for it." Octavian turned away from her and teased open
another fold of the Thintown Post. It was a slow
process; a 135° angle isn't the best shape to
open up the folds of a broadline.

"May I help you, Father?" asked Pin.

"Broadlines are for men, daughter. You don't need to
worry about the news of the day." Octavian was not the
most civil of octagons.

Octavian struggled with an inner fold for another
minute, and then Pin finally lost her patience. As her
father pulled back to breathe, she swung around him and
teased the broadline open with her tip.

"Daughter! How dare you defy me. Go to your
quarters."

"If you'd hire an iso servant, you wouldn't have this
problem."

"Do not tell me how to act in my household. Now go."

"Yes, Father."
AGOL
2007-03-07 16:56:57 UTC
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Flatland? Just a guess - I haven't read it. Nice idea if it is.

AGOL


"Eric Jablow" <***@cox.net> wrote in message news:1huj0c3.29eoi1u2h8nxN%***@cox.net...
| Pinny, Slaying
| by Eric Jablow
| Part One
|
| Synopsis: Willow's spell called all the slayers in
| every dimension, even when one of the dimensions is
| missing.
|
| Rating: G. Some comic-panel type violence.
|
| Note: I am using British spellings here to keep with
| the flavour of the original source. The source is in
| the public domain; try guessing what it is, and where
| the slang comes from.
|
| ---
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Eric Jablow
2007-03-08 02:06:48 UTC
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Post by AGOL
Flatland? Just a guess - I haven't read it. Nice idea if it is.
AGOL
Yes, Flatland. But I'm going to need to revise this because I just
looked at the book again, and it's much grimmer than I remembered. For
example, Flatland women were universally uneducated according to the
laws of each nation there, so the school scenes I was writing need to
go. I'll post agin next week.

The adventures of Pinny the Vampire Slayer and her friend Lil Doe will
continue.

Note that Edwin A. Abbott, the author of Flatland, worked hard to
improve women's education in Victorian England. The book was both a
math lesson and a social satire.
Captain Average
2007-03-09 07:32:05 UTC
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Now that I understand the references, I have to say that this is
a really good fic.

I like the idea of a dimension where colours like red and gold
are mere rumours. I'm going to have to see if I can scare up a
copy of "Flatland."

Nicely done, Eric.

Captain Average
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Eric Jablow
2007-03-09 12:17:30 UTC
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Post by Captain Average
Now that I understand the references, I have to say that this is
a really good fic.
I like the idea of a dimension where colours like red and gold
are mere rumours. I'm going to have to see if I can scare up a
copy of "Flatland."
Flatland has colours. But the use of colours was banned long ago
because women and low polygons used coloured cosmetics to masquerade as
high polygons, disrupting the social order. Artful application of
cosmetics and shading would make the extremities of a female line
segment look dimmer and more distant, emulating how a hexagon would look
in the Flatland fog.

That's from Edwin Abbott's original book.

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Respectfully,
Eric Jablow
Don Sample
2007-03-09 19:20:53 UTC
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Post by Captain Average
Now that I understand the references, I have to say that this is
a really good fic.
I like the idea of a dimension where colours like red and gold
are mere rumours. I'm going to have to see if I can scare up a
copy of "Flatland."
You can find a copy of it here:
<http://www.geom.uiuc.edu/~banchoff/Flatland/>
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Eric Jablow
2007-03-10 03:31:48 UTC
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Post by Don Sample
<http://www.geom.uiuc.edu/~banchoff/Flatland/>
Professor Banchoff wrote the introduction for the Princeton University
Press 1991 edition of Flatland, and gives entertaining lectures on it.
You can see his various projects at

http://www.math.brown.edu/TFBCON2003/mathematics/welcome.html
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Respectfully,
Eric Jablow
Captain Average
2007-03-11 03:58:00 UTC
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Thanks, Don.

Cap
Post by Don Sample
Post by Captain Average
Now that I understand the references, I have to say that this is
a really good fic.
I like the idea of a dimension where colours like red and gold
are mere rumours. I'm going to have to see if I can scare up a
copy of "Flatland."
<http://www.geom.uiuc.edu/~banchoff/Flatland/>
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Visit the Buffy Body Count at <http://homepage.mac.com/dsample/>
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